Wednesday, May 28, 2008

My Special Tree By William

Four years ago when we were living in Mt Wellington, I had an enormous tree growing at the back of my house. It was a guava tree and it had heaps of red and green coloured fruit growing on it. My brothers and I built a big tree house on the top of the tree. Everyday I would go outside and climb into my tree house to watch the beautiful sun set with all my other friends, but then we moved. I just sat inside my tree house and cried. The last time I climbed tree I could smell its beautiful green leaves and I could feel the hard rough thick bark under my hands and feet. When we hopped in the car I looked back at all those years I had climbed that beautiful tree. When we were backing out of the driveway my fiends came running and were asking me if they could have my tree. I said yes then I started to weep. We were off. Now every time we go to church I see that tree and it looks just the same.

9 comments:

Room 6 said...

hey William


i like the way you pronounced your work and how you used interesting words in your massive story,see you soon bro.

by Earle and Anthony

Room 6 said...
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Room 6 said...

Hey William
I like the way you wrote
your story about your special
tree, and I like the way you used
describing words.

By Jasmin and Sophia

Korero Pt England said...

Great writing William. I like the way you have posted the written text as well as the video. When I realised what you had done I listened to your video a second time while I read the words on the first post.
Mrs Burt

Glenbrae School said...

Hi William,

You have used lots of describing words to describe your tree house. It must have been very sad to leave your tree house, but the memories of the fun times you had will never be taken from you. There is nothing like a secret hide away. I had a play house when I was growing up and I had a lot of times with my friends.

Keep up the great writing,
I look forward to hearing more of your writing.

From Miss Paton
Glenbrae School.

Ms Hansell said...

Hello Room 7. I have absolutely LOVED viewing your class blog and feel like the luckiest Mother Duck in the world to have such clever writers, readers, and teachers representing us as Tamaki Primary learners. Congratulations and seeing this blog is so much better than watching TV.
Ka tino pai nga mahi nui tamariki ma. Kia Ora ki te Kaiako, Mrs Anderson. He Wahine Toa koe!!!

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